Not a fan of the quasi-furry artwork, I must admit.
But the story itself seem pretty good.
The POV of someone other than the main character reveals a little bit -too- much. I am not a fan of a secondary POV in novels or visual novels. They tend to take out the mystery of the story and interrupt the flow of the storytelling.
It's a pretty big spoiler in this story. Too big. The hint you get from the news and asking that customer about his troubles put together would have been subtle and nice. Adding his POV after is like being hit in the fact with a sledghammer of a clue --it's too much. Cute. But too much.
(Perhaps a later shadowed figure sequence -after- you've met all the characters in the story who says those things.... that might have worked. Kept the mystery alive. The yandere POV directly after meeting said person ran a bit too long, but overall it wasn't bad. The second POV from him was very good. But again; Too revealing.)
Those minor flaws aside, this story is most defiantly wonderful.
Good enough that I can ignore the artstyle I dislike. And any minor flaws. (I know, I nitpick. A lot. I'm a writer myself, so I always critique stories. lol)
I hope there will be a full version of this game somewhere. Preferably on Steam. It's the only place I actually buy games.
If it shows up on Steam, it defiantly goes on my wishlist.
Please don't worry, your critique is highly appreciated ^^b
Thank you for playing our game even though you don't like the art style lol.
I understand your dislike for other characters' POVs. Personally, I think it depends on the writer's intent and their reason for showing things from a different POV (and I can assure you that we won't go overboard with it xD)
So let me explain ours: He was never meant to be a big mystery. This game was primarily created for an existing fanbase that already knew a lot about Damon. Pretending he was just an innocent customer wouldn’t have added much to the experience imo. And one of the main questions will rather be whether you should trust him~
I hope this explanation suffices ^^
We're still working on the next chapter, and if we ever release it on Steam, it will only be once the full version is complete :)
I see. If the game is using an already known character I see your logic.
Still think it's better without it. But I do admit he IS cute in those scenes. lol
Your story is one of those that transcends the artwork tho. Like Stephen King said: You can forgive almost anything if the story is good enough. Or the character, in this case. (Since I don't know much of the story yet.)
I think Pov add flavor and I like seeing what the other characters think keep up the awesome work <3! everyone does have their own like thou and its ok
A promising game with beautiful graphics and some really attractive love interests ! I can't wait to see what the developers have in store for us next. All the best !
is this the full game so far.is there a place to download the rest. If this is all so far will day 2 be here or on steam. Can someone please let me know.
Really good game. Needs another chapter to it. Loving the routes with Damon, DG, and Rasmus. I'm truly excited for this to be completed. Should definitely have voice actors. The main ones to voice. Maybe voice the side characters to add more depth to it.
I really liked this game, the art is amazing and the characters are rlly fun and interesting! LITERALLY CANT WAIT FOR THE FULL GAME TO COME OUT. My only criticism of this game is the MC we play as, they're kind of like a doormat kind of character and even the options which they do get a little mouthy but still kind of recluse back to that state again. THIS ISN'T MEANT TO SOUND LIKE IM HATING I LOVE THIS GAME. I just think the dialogue options for the MC are very....help idk how to describe it but they MC is basically an easy target. Like even when they say "Do I look like a technician to you?" They still fix the AC for Rasmus, LIKE GIRL NOOOO.
Or when hes harassing them girly doesn't do or say ANYTHING. Not saying the MC has to tell someone to kill themselves js bc they called them a loser but it would be nice to have more mcs who can read a bitch that has an attitude for filth, because period. (YOU DONT HAVE TO CHANGE IT IF U DONT WANT TO OFC!, its ur game!) Or less of someone who says "They're so quiet and unfriendly" about other people. AGAIN I LOVE THIS GAME, THE ART IS AMAZING THE CHARACTER DESIGNS LOOK REALLY GOOD, YOU DID AMAZING WITH THIS GAME AND I CANT WAIT FOR IT TO COME OUT. The storyline is well written and so interesting! I love that it doesn't immediately start exposition or lore dumping the minute you start playing like how a lot of other games do, and I love that you can choose a lot of your dialog options, esp in the first part of the game. I also really like that the MC actually has a personality, it makes them relatable and actually shows why someone would like them. Cause I notice in a lot of visual novels, usually with the male mcs they have ZERO personality, or is just one report away from being on the sex offenders list, yet all of the love interest(s) fall for them, and its like how did you even THINK about wanting that man in your life baby? SO I LOVE that you gave them a personality. I also really love how depending on what you choose to do after Rasmus(sorry if I got his name wrong) Changes your fate and who you end up with!
Thank you so much for your comment, it helps a lot <3
Yep, this is by design. MC is aware of the different power dynamic between them and Rasmus. He's the son of the manager after all - one word from him and MC could get fired. So they try their best not to overdo it with the "bitchy" attitude. But! With each new chapter, MC can gradually become more feisty or even ruthless if you want to. This could be part of your roleplay later if you want to develop your MC into growing more backbone :)
I also prefer giving MC a bit of a personality (and background), it's more fun to write it that way ^^
Could someone help me on that part- i have Ren'py plugin installed and Joiplay, joiplay wants me to download Ren'py plugin when I already have- i need a wee little help lol
Didn't expect 3 routes, and one of them ends up killing us (thx so much rasmus.) I love the character designs which ends up as rasmus being my favorite. I like damon too, if we end up being around him we might have some chances of not dying by DG's hands.(hat's what i like to think..)
anywys, im hoping it's gonna be finished by the time my life ends. Take your time n dont pressure urself into doin smth that you can't do beyond your limits. I'm willingly okay in being patient for the updates.
You might as well forget about it since they have been promising to release the second day for over a year now, instead the main owner having breakdowns in their socials and always coming up with reasons why they didn't. If it's coming out at all, then nowhere soon. <3
Hey, thanks for sharing your perspective! We completely understand the frustration of waiting, and we appreciate that you care enough to share your feelings.
Just to clarify, we've always been transparent that this is a passion project we work on in our spare time, not something developed full-time. While progress is slow, we’re committed to delivering the best experience we can manage at our own pace. Thank you for your patience and understanding, it means a lot to us :)
Literally six months ago, Holy gave a sneak peek of day 2, and are always mentioning they have WORK, that drains them. Idk if you ever tried to do creative stuff, but work can make a person so exhausted that they don't have the brains to continue what they want. Not everyone is able to do that. If you want to forget about it and think it's a waste of time to wait, fine, that's you. But don't go around and telling other people that like it's supposed to mean something. I've been here.. what 5 days? And I've seen so, SO many people who for that whole year were able to find joy in something unfinished. Heck, I got inspired by this game, and the writing, and I'm willing to wait for more. Games take time. Writing takes time, DRAWING takes time. I do the last two, along with school, and it can drain me so much I once didn't draw or write for a whole month.
If it's coming out, but it's nowhere soon, I and many other people who fell in love with something so simple, WILL wait.
Es De mis juegos favoritos realmente me encanta, no puedo esperar a jugar el día 2 y poder ver a Damon otra vez, es un caramelo relleno de amor, es tan dulce y tierno como me encanta y si el juego entra en mis top 3 favoritos, sigan así *corazon*
Ahhhhh really looking forward to the full release <3 Been on the hunt for more games like BTD and this scratched the itch (and maybe made it even itchier)
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Alguien sabe si ya hay una fecha aproximada para el dia 2 :c
I don't believe there is any ETA yet, sadly … we'll just have to be patient.
Not a fan of the quasi-furry artwork, I must admit.
But the story itself seem pretty good.
The POV of someone other than the main character reveals a little bit -too- much. I am not a fan of a secondary POV in novels or visual novels. They tend to take out the mystery of the story and interrupt the flow of the storytelling.
It's a pretty big spoiler in this story. Too big.
The hint you get from the news and asking that customer about his troubles put together would have been subtle and nice.
Adding his POV after is like being hit in the fact with a sledghammer of a clue --it's too much.
Cute. But too much.
(Perhaps a later shadowed figure sequence -after- you've met all the characters in the story who says those things.... that might have worked. Kept the mystery alive.
The yandere POV directly after meeting said person ran a bit too long, but overall it wasn't bad. The second POV from him was very good. But again; Too revealing.)
Those minor flaws aside, this story is most defiantly wonderful.
Good enough that I can ignore the artstyle I dislike. And any minor flaws.
(I know, I nitpick. A lot. I'm a writer myself, so I always critique stories. lol)
I hope there will be a full version of this game somewhere.
Preferably on Steam.
It's the only place I actually buy games.
If it shows up on Steam, it defiantly goes on my wishlist.
Hi, fellow writer :)
Please don't worry, your critique is highly appreciated ^^b
Thank you for playing our game even though you don't like the art style lol.
I understand your dislike for other characters' POVs. Personally, I think it depends on the writer's intent and their reason for showing things from a different POV (and I can assure you that we won't go overboard with it xD)
So let me explain ours: He was never meant to be a big mystery. This game was primarily created for an existing fanbase that already knew a lot about Damon. Pretending he was just an innocent customer wouldn’t have added much to the experience imo. And one of the main questions will rather be whether you should trust him~
I hope this explanation suffices ^^
We're still working on the next chapter, and if we ever release it on Steam, it will only be once the full version is complete :)
Thank you again and have a wonderful week!
I see. If the game is using an already known character I see your logic.
Still think it's better without it. But I do admit he IS cute in those scenes. lol
Your story is one of those that transcends the artwork tho.
Like Stephen King said: You can forgive almost anything if the story is good enough.
Or the character, in this case. (Since I don't know much of the story yet.)
I look forward to see more of the game. ^_^
I think Pov add flavor and I like seeing what the other characters think keep up the awesome work <3! everyone does have their own like thou and its ok
is this still wip?
Not sure, but its a great game for only having day 1 complete
alguien sabe si ya tiene fecha el dia 2?? 😖
necesito la versión completa definitivamente¡¡¡😭😭😭
necesito una guia-
I really wish i could play it. But i'm on phone, bummer lol
Joiplay.. you can play this game on joiplay
thank you! :D
So I was trying to, I have ren'py plugin installed through a file but joiplay still won't let me play it
Try using joiplay version 1.20.550 and Ren py plugging version 1.00.10. those work for me!
joiplay is 1.20.500, but i guess my ren py is wrong lol, though it was the version that joiplay wanted me to install... but I'll try your idea :D
My ren py was 2.1, i'm gonna look for the 1.0 then
Can anyone tell me if there is already new infos for day 2?
in Holy's twitter account there are a couple of spoilers of the scrypt and dialogs, but there isn't a date for the day 2
ohh okay! Thank you <3
I loved the game, but being part of the Spanish-speaking community I would like them to neutralize the accent, only if possible. THANKS <3
game aint getting updated ever again
just be patient 😂 they posted day 2 script spoilers on their twitter! It was a lil bit ago but it means it’s coming lol
at my knees because of men with red flags.
A promising game with beautiful graphics and some really attractive love interests ! I can't wait to see what the developers have in store for us next. All the best !
Even though it’s just a demo and just day 1 I love playing it again and again 😅 Great work love it!
hyvää syntymäpäivää, rakkaani <3
Agh i love this game
is this the full game so far.is there a place to download the rest. If this is all so far will day 2 be here or on steam. Can someone please let me know.
Really good game. Needs another chapter to it. Loving the routes with Damon, DG, and Rasmus. I'm truly excited for this to be completed. Should definitely have voice actors. The main ones to voice. Maybe voice the side characters to add more depth to it.
I really liked this game, the art is amazing and the characters are rlly fun and interesting! LITERALLY CANT WAIT FOR THE FULL GAME TO COME OUT. My only criticism of this game is the MC we play as, they're kind of like a doormat kind of character and even the options which they do get a little mouthy but still kind of recluse back to that state again. THIS ISN'T MEANT TO SOUND LIKE IM HATING I LOVE THIS GAME. I just think the dialogue options for the MC are very....help idk how to describe it but they MC is basically an easy target. Like even when they say "Do I look like a technician to you?" They still fix the AC for Rasmus, LIKE GIRL NOOOO.
Or when hes harassing them girly doesn't do or say ANYTHING. Not saying the MC has to tell someone to kill themselves js bc they called them a loser but it would be nice to have more mcs who can read a bitch that has an attitude for filth, because period. (YOU DONT HAVE TO CHANGE IT IF U DONT WANT TO OFC!, its ur game!) Or less of someone who says "They're so quiet and unfriendly" about other people. AGAIN I LOVE THIS GAME, THE ART IS AMAZING THE CHARACTER DESIGNS LOOK REALLY GOOD, YOU DID AMAZING WITH THIS GAME AND I CANT WAIT FOR IT TO COME OUT. The storyline is well written and so interesting! I love that it doesn't immediately start exposition or lore dumping the minute you start playing like how a lot of other games do, and I love that you can choose a lot of your dialog options, esp in the first part of the game. I also really like that the MC actually has a personality, it makes them relatable and actually shows why someone would like them. Cause I notice in a lot of visual novels, usually with the male mcs they have ZERO personality, or is just one report away from being on the sex offenders list, yet all of the love interest(s) fall for them, and its like how did you even THINK about wanting that man in your life baby? SO I LOVE that you gave them a personality. I also really love how depending on what you choose to do after Rasmus(sorry if I got his name wrong) Changes your fate and who you end up with!
Thank you so much for your comment, it helps a lot <3
Yep, this is by design. MC is aware of the different power dynamic between them and Rasmus. He's the son of the manager after all - one word from him and MC could get fired. So they try their best not to overdo it with the "bitchy" attitude. But! With each new chapter, MC can gradually become more feisty or even ruthless if you want to. This could be part of your roleplay later if you want to develop your MC into growing more backbone :)
I also prefer giving MC a bit of a personality (and background), it's more fun to write it that way ^^
Thanks again and have a nice week!
OMG I CANT BELIEVE YOU RESPONDED TYSM AND IM SO EXCITED TO SEE YOUR GAME COME OUT YOU HAVE A NICE WEEK TOO
hope for a day 2
i am going to cry if there going to be no day 2...
Do you have any plans on making an Android version? Please, I don't have a computer and I want to play this so baddddddddd. :‹
Try joiplay, I am on Android I am playing it
Could someone help me on that part- i have Ren'py plugin installed and Joiplay, joiplay wants me to download Ren'py plugin when I already have- i need a wee little help lol
Are they the same Version? Or the latest ones? Cuz mine isn't the latest...
Edit: I literally have like... 4different versions of renpy plugins that's installable
Another edit: Have you installed the Plugin? Go to plugins and see one of the installable ones
I had to download and install both of them, they are both apps, both are there. Ren py plugin i have is 2.1, my joiplay is 1.2-
Joiplay wanted me to install Ren py and I installed the version it wanted me too?
I aint good at this, i just really wanted to play the game lol
when is the next day coming out? It's been a while
Will this ever be available for Android?
Supposedly joiplay, but i'm having troubles with it
could you tell me if you ever figure it out please?
to be honest... I just installed every version of ren ply pluggin, one of them worked, but you need a certain joyplay, 1.20.550
There's only 4 renply pluggins on joiplay that are installable so u don't need to install like 100 and use so much room-
When your going to put in the game, import the game through "Import Archive File" because i don't think it'll show up if you use "add game"
I made a divination. There will have day2, launched after 11 months or 1 year and 10 months.
i played this game again on christmas and i still like it😼
just wondering why I can't play this game in browser? like is there a reason why I have to download it?
Nope, there's no particular reason for that. I simply never looked into how to make the game playable in a browser. Was never a thought nor priority.
Hey! você se interessa em fazer mais traduções? como português?
I'll never get enough
Such a cutie lol
will this have any update? D: its been a year since the last development log; ;
Ода жду с нетерпением второй день🔪🔪☝🏿
Es un juego genial wtf, espero el segundo día y el lanzamiento completo del juegoo ><
creo que solo se quedara para los que paguen patreon
This is amazing, can't wait for more!!!
Didn't expect 3 routes, and one of them ends up killing us (
thx so much rasmus.) I love the character designs which ends up as rasmus being my favorite. I like damon too, if we end up being around him we might have some chances of not dying by DG's hands.(hat's what i like to think..)So gripping, I normally have a hard time with visual novels, but I can't wait to see more
hi! we are waiting for the continuation of the story. the game so badassss
send kisses to Brazil, please? thanks for everything! 💚💛
¿Pero cuando van a actualizar? Me da muchas ganas de jugarlo, pero no sé nada más que esto :'(
Man, when it say "end of day 1" I straight up screamed "NO! But I want more!"
I'm so excited to see what the rest will be, I'm already so hooked up by this!
You might as well forget about it since they have been promising to release the second day for over a year now, instead the main owner having breakdowns in their socials and always coming up with reasons why they didn't. If it's coming out at all, then nowhere soon. <3
Hey, thanks for sharing your perspective! We completely understand the frustration of waiting, and we appreciate that you care enough to share your feelings.
Just to clarify, we've always been transparent that this is a passion project we work on in our spare time, not something developed full-time. While progress is slow, we’re committed to delivering the best experience we can manage at our own pace. Thank you for your patience and understanding, it means a lot to us :)
I'm happy to see an announcement about the game, I replay it from time to time and I still enjoy it. I'll patiently wait for the update ^^
Literally six months ago, Holy gave a sneak peek of day 2, and are always mentioning they have WORK, that drains them. Idk if you ever tried to do creative stuff, but work can make a person so exhausted that they don't have the brains to continue what they want. Not everyone is able to do that. If you want to forget about it and think it's a waste of time to wait, fine, that's you. But don't go around and telling other people that like it's supposed to mean something. I've been here.. what 5 days? And I've seen so, SO many people who for that whole year were able to find joy in something unfinished. Heck, I got inspired by this game, and the writing, and I'm willing to wait for more.
Games take time. Writing takes time, DRAWING takes time. I do the last two, along with school, and it can drain me so much I once didn't draw or write for a whole month.
If it's coming out, but it's nowhere soon, I and many other people who fell in love with something so simple, WILL wait.
the writer said day 1 took them 2 YEARS to make and it's only 2 people working on this. chill tf out
Es De mis juegos favoritos realmente me encanta, no puedo esperar a jugar el día 2 y poder ver a Damon otra vez, es un caramelo relleno de amor, es tan dulce y tierno como me encanta y si el juego entra en mis top 3 favoritos, sigan así *corazon*
Ahhhhh really looking forward to the full release <3 Been on the hunt for more games like BTD and this scratched the itch (and maybe made it even itchier)
Estaria bueno que se pudiera descargar para linux :)