Not a fan of the quasi-furry artwork, I must admit.
But the story itself seem pretty good.
The POV of someone other than the main character reveals a little bit -too- much. I am not a fan of a secondary POV in novels or visual novels. They tend to take out the mystery of the story and interrupt the flow of the storytelling.
It's a pretty big spoiler in this story. Too big. The hint you get from the news and asking that customer about his troubles put together would have been subtle and nice. Adding his POV after is like being hit in the fact with a sledghammer of a clue --it's too much. Cute. But too much.
(Perhaps a later shadowed figure sequence -after- you've met all the characters in the story who says those things.... that might have worked. Kept the mystery alive. The yandere POV directly after meeting said person ran a bit too long, but overall it wasn't bad. The second POV from him was very good. But again; Too revealing.)
Those minor flaws aside, this story is most defiantly wonderful.
Good enough that I can ignore the artstyle I dislike. And any minor flaws. (I know, I nitpick. A lot. I'm a writer myself, so I always critique stories. lol)
I hope there will be a full version of this game somewhere. Preferably on Steam. It's the only place I actually buy games.
If it shows up on Steam, it defiantly goes on my wishlist.
Okay. I still don’t understand why people like that game, or why it was made, but I won’t support it bc one of the creators drew the character as a N*zi
A promising game with beautiful graphics and some really attractive love interests ! I can't wait to see what the developers have in store for us next. All the best !
is this the full game so far.is there a place to download the rest. If this is all so far will day 2 be here or on steam. Can someone please let me know.
Really good game. Needs another chapter to it. Loving the routes with Damon, DG, and Rasmus. I'm truly excited for this to be completed. Should definitely have voice actors. The main ones to voice. Maybe voice the side characters to add more depth to it.
I really liked this game, the art is amazing and the characters are rlly fun and interesting! LITERALLY CANT WAIT FOR THE FULL GAME TO COME OUT. My only criticism of this game is the MC we play as, they're kind of like a doormat kind of character and even the options which they do get a little mouthy but still kind of recluse back to that state again. THIS ISN'T MEANT TO SOUND LIKE IM HATING I LOVE THIS GAME. I just think the dialogue options for the MC are very....help idk how to describe it but they MC is basically an easy target. Like even when they say "Do I look like a technician to you?" They still fix the AC for Rasmus, LIKE GIRL NOOOO.
Or when hes harassing them girly doesn't do or say ANYTHING. Not saying the MC has to tell someone to kill themselves js bc they called them a loser but it would be nice to have more mcs who can read a bitch that has an attitude for filth, because period. (YOU DONT HAVE TO CHANGE IT IF U DONT WANT TO OFC!, its ur game!) Or less of someone who says "They're so quiet and unfriendly" about other people. AGAIN I LOVE THIS GAME, THE ART IS AMAZING THE CHARACTER DESIGNS LOOK REALLY GOOD, YOU DID AMAZING WITH THIS GAME AND I CANT WAIT FOR IT TO COME OUT. The storyline is well written and so interesting! I love that it doesn't immediately start exposition or lore dumping the minute you start playing like how a lot of other games do, and I love that you can choose a lot of your dialog options, esp in the first part of the game. I also really like that the MC actually has a personality, it makes them relatable and actually shows why someone would like them. Cause I notice in a lot of visual novels, usually with the male mcs they have ZERO personality, or is just one report away from being on the sex offenders list, yet all of the love interest(s) fall for them, and its like how did you even THINK about wanting that man in your life baby? SO I LOVE that you gave them a personality. I also really love how depending on what you choose to do after Rasmus(sorry if I got his name wrong) Changes your fate and who you end up with!
Could someone help me on that part- i have Ren'py plugin installed and Joiplay, joiplay wants me to download Ren'py plugin when I already have- i need a wee little help lol
Didn't expect 3 routes, and one of them ends up killing us (thx so much rasmus.) I love the character designs which ends up as rasmus being my favorite. I like damon too, if we end up being around him we might have some chances of not dying by DG's hands.(hat's what i like to think..)
anywys, im hoping it's gonna be finished by the time my life ends. Take your time n dont pressure urself into doin smth that you can't do beyond your limits. I'm willingly okay in being patient for the updates.
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10/10 :D
Alguien sabe si ya hay una fecha aproximada para el dia 2 :c
Not a fan of the quasi-furry artwork, I must admit.
But the story itself seem pretty good.
The POV of someone other than the main character reveals a little bit -too- much. I am not a fan of a secondary POV in novels or visual novels. They tend to take out the mystery of the story and interrupt the flow of the storytelling.
It's a pretty big spoiler in this story. Too big.
The hint you get from the news and asking that customer about his troubles put together would have been subtle and nice.
Adding his POV after is like being hit in the fact with a sledghammer of a clue --it's too much.
Cute. But too much.
(Perhaps a later shadowed figure sequence -after- you've met all the characters in the story who says those things.... that might have worked. Kept the mystery alive.
The yandere POV directly after meeting said person ran a bit too long, but overall it wasn't bad. The second POV from him was very good. But again; Too revealing.)
Those minor flaws aside, this story is most defiantly wonderful.
Good enough that I can ignore the artstyle I dislike. And any minor flaws.
(I know, I nitpick. A lot. I'm a writer myself, so I always critique stories. lol)
I hope there will be a full version of this game somewhere.
Preferably on Steam.
It's the only place I actually buy games.
If it shows up on Steam, it defiantly goes on my wishlist.
is this still wip?
Not sure, but its a great game for only having day 1 complete
alguien sabe si ya tiene fecha el dia 2?? 😖
necesito la versión completa definitivamente¡¡¡😭😭😭
necesito una guia-
btd isn't supposed to be a lovey dovey dating sim hope this helps
It’s not? Then, is it just a smut thing? I remember mentions of it being advertised as fetish content. /gen
If it’s not either of those, then what purpose does the game serve, exactly?
the very first warning the game gives you is that its a horrorp*rn game, thats literally it
Okay. I still don’t understand why people like that game, or why it was made, but I won’t support it bc one of the creators drew the character as a N*zi
It's based on btd? I thought it was based on colored gaze (Since... the story is almost literally the same from the most part)
I really wish i could play it. But i'm on phone, bummer lol
Joiplay.. you can play this game on joiplay
thank you! :D
So I was trying to, I have ren'py plugin installed through a file but joiplay still won't let me play it
Try using joiplay version 1.20.550 and Ren py plugging version 1.00.10. those work for me!
joiplay is 1.20.500, but i guess my ren py is wrong lol, though it was the version that joiplay wanted me to install... but I'll try your idea :D
My ren py was 2.1, i'm gonna look for the 1.0 then
Can anyone tell me if there is already new infos for day 2?
in Holy's twitter account there are a couple of spoilers of the scrypt and dialogs, but there isn't a date for the day 2
ohh okay! Thank you <3
I loved the game, but being part of the Spanish-speaking community I would like them to neutralize the accent, only if possible. THANKS <3
game aint getting updated ever again
at my knees because of men with red flags.
A promising game with beautiful graphics and some really attractive love interests ! I can't wait to see what the developers have in store for us next. All the best !
Even though it’s just a demo and just day 1 I love playing it again and again 😅 Great work love it!
hyvää syntymäpäivää, rakkaani <3
Agh i love this game
is this the full game so far.is there a place to download the rest. If this is all so far will day 2 be here or on steam. Can someone please let me know.
Really good game. Needs another chapter to it. Loving the routes with Damon, DG, and Rasmus. I'm truly excited for this to be completed. Should definitely have voice actors. The main ones to voice. Maybe voice the side characters to add more depth to it.
I really liked this game, the art is amazing and the characters are rlly fun and interesting! LITERALLY CANT WAIT FOR THE FULL GAME TO COME OUT. My only criticism of this game is the MC we play as, they're kind of like a doormat kind of character and even the options which they do get a little mouthy but still kind of recluse back to that state again. THIS ISN'T MEANT TO SOUND LIKE IM HATING I LOVE THIS GAME. I just think the dialogue options for the MC are very....help idk how to describe it but they MC is basically an easy target. Like even when they say "Do I look like a technician to you?" They still fix the AC for Rasmus, LIKE GIRL NOOOO.
Or when hes harassing them girly doesn't do or say ANYTHING. Not saying the MC has to tell someone to kill themselves js bc they called them a loser but it would be nice to have more mcs who can read a bitch that has an attitude for filth, because period. (YOU DONT HAVE TO CHANGE IT IF U DONT WANT TO OFC!, its ur game!) Or less of someone who says "They're so quiet and unfriendly" about other people. AGAIN I LOVE THIS GAME, THE ART IS AMAZING THE CHARACTER DESIGNS LOOK REALLY GOOD, YOU DID AMAZING WITH THIS GAME AND I CANT WAIT FOR IT TO COME OUT. The storyline is well written and so interesting! I love that it doesn't immediately start exposition or lore dumping the minute you start playing like how a lot of other games do, and I love that you can choose a lot of your dialog options, esp in the first part of the game. I also really like that the MC actually has a personality, it makes them relatable and actually shows why someone would like them. Cause I notice in a lot of visual novels, usually with the male mcs they have ZERO personality, or is just one report away from being on the sex offenders list, yet all of the love interest(s) fall for them, and its like how did you even THINK about wanting that man in your life baby? SO I LOVE that you gave them a personality. I also really love how depending on what you choose to do after Rasmus(sorry if I got his name wrong) Changes your fate and who you end up with!
hope for a day 2
i am going to cry if there going to be no day 2...
Do you have any plans on making an Android version? Please, I don't have a computer and I want to play this so baddddddddd. :‹
Try joiplay, I am on Android I am playing it
Could someone help me on that part- i have Ren'py plugin installed and Joiplay, joiplay wants me to download Ren'py plugin when I already have- i need a wee little help lol
Are they the same Version? Or the latest ones? Cuz mine isn't the latest...
Edit: I literally have like... 4different versions of renpy plugins that's installable
Another edit: Have you installed the Plugin? Go to plugins and see one of the installable ones
I had to download and install both of them, they are both apps, both are there. Ren py plugin i have is 2.1, my joiplay is 1.2-
Joiplay wanted me to install Ren py and I installed the version it wanted me too?
I aint good at this, i just really wanted to play the game lol
when is the next day coming out? It's been a while
Will this ever be available for Android?
Supposedly joiplay, but i'm having troubles with it
I made a divination. There will have day2, launched after 11 months or 1 year and 10 months.
i played this game again on christmas and i still like it😼
just wondering why I can't play this game in browser? like is there a reason why I have to download it?
Nope, there's no particular reason for that. I simply never looked into how to make the game playable in a browser. Was never a thought nor priority.
Hey! você se interessa em fazer mais traduções? como português?
I'll never get enough
Such a cutie lol
will this have any update? D: its been a year since the last development log; ;
Ода жду с нетерпением второй день🔪🔪☝🏿
Es un juego genial wtf, espero el segundo día y el lanzamiento completo del juegoo ><
creo que solo se quedara para los que paguen patreon
This is amazing, can't wait for more!!!
Didn't expect 3 routes, and one of them ends up killing us (
thx so much rasmus.) I love the character designs which ends up as rasmus being my favorite. I like damon too, if we end up being around him we might have some chances of not dying by DG's hands.(hat's what i like to think..)So gripping, I normally have a hard time with visual novels, but I can't wait to see more
hi! we are waiting for the continuation of the story. the game so badassss
send kisses to Brazil, please? thanks for everything! 💚💛
¿Pero cuando van a actualizar? Me da muchas ganas de jugarlo, pero no sé nada más que esto :'(